I like the story, though I have a feeling that it misses a slight physical description of the main characters, and the moment of walking out of Julia doesn't shocking enough. It would certainly stir curiousity if one experiences that as such, but maybe you need to flesh out how James takes Julia's direct gesture. I hope this helps :))
I like the story, though I have a feeling that it misses a slight physical description of the main characters, and the moment of walking out of Julia doesn't shocking enough. It would certainly stir curiousity if one experiences that as such, but maybe you need to flesh out how James takes Julia's direct gesture. I hope this helps :))