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Kainan's avatar

This is amazing friend, i read it about 5 times !

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Stan Boddeke's avatar

I really love this story! I love how meta it is at times, how cliché at others, with just the right amount of irony. I really enjoy that one character is constantly referred to as lunch-meat.

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Luke Ambrose's avatar

Thanks Stan! Yeah I think sometimes authors stress too much about naming their characters. There are occasions when you have to just call them what they are.

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Stan Boddeke's avatar

I enjoy that you leave that out, due to it the story stays imagistic

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